Showing posts with label Hawkeye. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Hawkeye. Show all posts

Monday, 6 August 2012

"Hawkeye #1" by Matt Fraction, David Aja and Matt Hollingsworth (The First Time No 2)

In which the blogger attends to the victorious nominations from the last Reader's Roulette. But with Black Kiss II delayed in UK customs and RASL having been the last chapter of a long-running story, only Hawkeye of all the winning suggestions is ready for the reviewing;  

            
After awhile, all that sincere acclamation starts to feel suspiciously like hype. Writer Matt Fraction, artist David Aja and colourist Matt Hollingsworth's Hawkeye has arrived to the blogosphere's equivalent of three rousing cheers and a shower of rose-petals. Thankfully, it is a fine comic, and if it's not quite the unconditional success that it's been painted as, it's still a promising and enjoyable debut.

Fraction, Aja and editor Steve Wacker have smartly kicked off the book by establishing a distinct, appropriate set-up for the title. Determinedly sidestepping the modern-era compulsion to enmesh solo titles in the complex continuity of the broader superhero-verse, they've deftly established Clint Barton as the guardian of a Brooklyn tenement block which has so far manged to escape the full force of gentrification. As with the same editorial office's Daredevil, this is a book which takes advantage of the rich diversity of neighbourhoods in New York City in order to create a distinctive and productive storytelling niche. Though there's thankfully no attempt made to ignore the existence of the Avengers, Hawkeye's first issue concentrates on the character's off-duty hours in an area of the world where the likes of Ultron and Norman Osborn are unlikely to frequently visit. Placed within such an untypical and interesting milieu, Barton himself is swiftly sketched out as a 21st century version of Denny Colt, constantly baffled, beaten up and shot while goodheartedly attempting to do what appears to be the right thing. As a platform for a variety of genre tales, from rampaging robots to romance, from slice'o'life melodrama to street tragedy, Hawkeye's new status quo is enticing robust and auspicious, playing to the character's strengths as a superhero "fighting with a stick and a string from the Paleolithic era" without precluding the appearance of more fantastical challenges.

           
Equally impressive is the atmosphere which the book's adopted. Part Lumet, part Capra, the comic's mostly informed by a good-natured, wry, and almost fairytale-like moral tone. No matter how grim the surface of the story is on occasion, it's rarely self-pitying and never embarrassingly worthy. This is a world where gangsters shoot good men in the arm without impeding their ability to haul great dying hounds to the local vets, and where superheroes can fall at least seven stories to the roof of a parked car and suffer only a six week stay in hospital. What counts isn't the verisimilitude of events, but their meaning, and it's a relief to encounter a world in which the charming absurdity of the superhero is acknowledged without undercutting the drama of events. The deliberate artificiality of Fraction's good-versus-evil tale is balanced out by the grit and precision of Aja's art, and the result means that the comic's neither predictably cod-realistic or somewhat over-sentimental. In that, Hawkeye suggests the work of a team who've not only read their Spirit tales, but thoroughly understood the appeal of Will Eisner's work from the period too.

         
Matt Fraction's plot and script are often both delightful and quietly ambitious. Hawkeye himself is allowed to remain a none-too-bright and yet - mostly - ethical and ingenious knight of the mean streets. Loved by gangster's dogs and roof-barbecuing neighbours alike, he's an impulsive and vulnerable target for an endearing excess of misfortune. It's a delight and a joy to find Fraction concentrating on dense storytelling compromised of a sequence of involving and often touching character moments, and if the book's hard-edged surface fails to entirely conceal a heart of the purest mush, there's nothing wrong with what's largely a celebration of community and self-sacrifice. Although it's obvious that, as with most of Fraction's work, the story is stamped through with a host of specific genre influences, the human element binds the inter-textuality of it all together in a way that makes this a satisfying story rather than a collection of nods and winks to other sources. Matched to that is an admirable determination to present a solidly traditional, self-contained story stiffened by a series of productively unobtrusive and admirable innovations. Hawkeye's narrative switches cleverly between time-periods without traditional markers of scene transitions, for example, a choice which succeeds in charging up events with a series of enticing enigmas. (*1) Even the choice to show Barton's guesses as to the language being used by those around him in their speech balloons adds a touch of novelty and insight to conventions usually presented in a taken-for-granted fashion.

*1:- As most reviews have quite rightly mentioned, Matt Hollingsworth's exquisitely well-judged colours are used to differentiate between time-periods, which avoids the need for story-slowing exposition. 

        
This conspiracy on Fraction and Aja's part to produce a comic which stands in opposition to the past dozen and so years of decompressed storytelling is perhaps the most immediately impressive aspect of Hawkeye. Aja's pages are joyfully dense in incident and detail, revelling in the potential of the comicbook to capture the specifics of time, character and place. Despite his own doubts on the matter, as expressed in the latest Decompressed podcast with Fraction and Kieron Gillen, Aja certainly does give the impression of channelling, though never copying or dumbing down, David Mazzucchelli's style as it blossomed during Born Again. (To take but one example, the scene of Barton's first appearance at the vets seems to playfully and sweetly echo Daredevil's dumping of Nuke at the Daily Bugle in DD#232.) But to note the fact that Aja's art can, accurately or not, be placed in a specific tradition isn't intended to suggest that his work lacks originality, character or quality. Quite the opposite is true, for his art here is undeniably something of a triumph. It's not just that he's fulfilled many of the essential qualities which a great many of today's artists struggle to, though his characters are all distinct and consistent, the emotional meaning of his scenes precise and moving, and the controlled dynamism of his storytelling persistently engrossing and frequently exciting. Yet in addition to that, his choices on the page always illuminate the narrative rather than celebrating his own skills or the conventions of the super-book itself. It is, despite the obvious distinction of these pages, a charmingly selfless achievement, in which the tale and not its teller is what's made to count.

          
Together, Fraction and Aja have produced a comic which - along with the rare likes of Mark Waid's Daredevil - serves as a satisfying, self-contained experience. Whatever qualifications might be added to such a judgement, their achievement is, in the context of today's all too often anoxeric and heartless super-books, genuine and creditable. Yet there are several problems with the comic which stand out all the more because of the quality of Hawkeye as a whole. And so, while it's laudable that Fraction has wanted to avoid portraying Hawkeye as a one-dimensional do-gooder, the scene in which Barton abandons a wheelchair in the street after having kicked out at it is a conspicuous and unfortunate misjudgement. It doesn't stand as a marker of his daring and impulsive nature, but rather as the brand of a selfish, self-obsessed egoist. "S'a little juvenile, I admit -- but I've wanted to do that for months", runs Barton's narration, as Aja's art shows the traffic blocked by the Avengers' public attack of entitlement. Worse yet is Barton's response to the nurse who quite rightly points out that "That's a two hunner dollah wheelchair y'just kicked inta traffic".  An entirely unconvincing apology counts for nothing, since Barton makes no attempt to help in the wheelchair's recovery, while his closing "Bill me" is as complacent and uncaring a punchline as might be imagined.

      
The adolescent scorning of authority figures and the rejection of community values is not in itself a signifier of virtue, let alone heroism, despite what a great deal of the West's popular entertainment appears to transmit, and Fraction's decisions here leave Hawkeye looking like a profoundly unimpressive individual. No matter how the story tries to load the argument in Barton's favour by presenting the nurse as a foul-mouthed joy-killer, the villain of the piece remains obvious. (*2) It's one of only two moments when Fraction's habit of presenting intriguing ideas without apparently considering their wider meaning shows itself here, but it entirely spoils the flow of the book. The spoilt, callous brat who features in this part of the tale bears no relation to the Hawkeye that's elsewhere in the comic, and his anti-social behaviour undercuts the sense that he's a profoundly decent man. It very much isn't a scene which establishes Hawkeye as cool, and the points it attempts to establish could have been made in a far less disagreeable fashion. (*3)

*2:- It's not that Hawkeye isn't shown as insensitive elsewhere, but there the harm is limited and he acts immediately to put things right. His lack of empathy with his fellow residents, for example, over the matter of "the hassle of moving" shows that he can be obtuse, but that's a long way from the litany of self-righteousness which the wheelchair scene transmits.
*3:- Fraction also has Hawkeye declare that "he's wanted to" kick out at and leave behind the wheelchair for months. It's an example of what psychologists call a technique of neutralisation, because it's a way for the mind to obscure responsibility with a spurious justification. For one thing, Hawkeye's claiming his frustration has lasted months, but he's only been in hospital for 6 weeks. In that, he's over-exaggerating his own hurt so as to legitimize his childishness. Far more importantly, what he wants and what's good for the hospital, the nurse and the traffic are very different things. 

          
Elsewhere, it's hard not to have qualms about "Ivan", the criminal landlord of the "big old building out in Bedford-Stuyvesant" where Hawkeye hangs his bow between Avengers missions. As a stereotype, he's as crude as the very name "Ivan" suggests. Not only is he is the typical pap-crime fiction representation of the Russian as gangster, but he's also the only character in the book who struggles with his English. In fact, he's your all-purpose criminal immigrant, and there's nothing elsewhere in the book to counter-point his brutality and selfishness with a less off-hand view of who is and who isn't an acceptable American. In fact, the community in Hawkeye is only returned to its status quo with Ivan's expulsion, which leaves the whole comic carrying a no-doubt unintended reactionary message.

          
Similarly, Bedford-Stuvyvesant itself does appear conspicuously, if of course not exclusively, White in Hawkeye, which, along with the matter of Ivan, points to a degree of insensitivity which just a few moments of self-reflection on the part of all concerned might have overturned. (We're shown 38 or so folks in its streets, tenements, gambling clubs and veterinarians, with only 7 of being Black, and only 1 of those - a victim  - having even a brief speaking role.) It's a lack of attention to detail combined with a love of the Big Moment which appears again in the scene in which Ivan is apparently being exiled from New York, if not America, by Hawkeye. "I broke no laws, Bro", he declares, which is obviously untrue, given that assault, threatening behaviour and theft at the very least could be added to a charge sheet. But Barton isn't, it appears, concerned with the law at all, which leaves a dubious taste to the comic's conclusion. Here we are again, at the point at which the superhero doesn't just take the law in their own hands to catch the bad guy, but passes judgement and serves sentence too. If only Barton had been made to tell Ivan that he knows he's an illegal immigrant, and that he  leave now with the money or else, then the scene would've sidestepped most of those concerns.

       
It ought to be said that I appear to be the only person in the entire blogosphere who's in the slightest bit worried about these matters, and I've no doubt that the charge of "overthinking" could well be applied to what I've written. And yet, one more pass over the story between all concerned could have eliminated these problems, and everything from the contemptuous business with the wheelchair to the worrying representational issues could have lost without the story suffering at all. That that either didn't happen, or that the issues weren't considered of importance, doesn't mean that Hawkeye isn''t a fundamentally impressive and enjoyable comic book. But it does mean that there's some notable flaws in what's otherwise a fine debut.

Will I be buying the second issue? I suspect I will. But I'll be hoping for just a touch more sensitivity too. Hawkeye's a comic which deserves to live up to own considerable potential.

Reader's Roulette Rating: Go buy, but prepare yourself for some speed-bumps on an apparently pedal-to-the-metal track.


         
Over-thinking? What else can expect from a blog with such a title?

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Thursday, 29 September 2011

On Hickman & Ribic's "The Ultimates" # 1:- Yet More Stories For Boys

        
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On the evidence of Messrs Hickman and Ribic's The Ultimates # 1, the fundamental concerns of feminism haven't yet become a matter of public concern and debate on Earth 1610, or, it needs to be said, in the offices of Marvel Comics either. For in the whole of The Republic Is Burning, there's not even a single minor speaking role given to anyone who's not evidently a bloke, while the few occasions in which women are discussed find them mentioned solely in a specifically sexual contenxt. 

(a) The most important role fulfilled by a woman in the pages of The Ultimates # 1 is that of having Nick Fury's drink waiting for him when he gets to work. No. Really. I'm not making that up. The evidence is above.

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In an attempt to be as fair as possible, it should be added that there are only 8 different characters in Mr Hickman's script who are given word-balloon time anyway. It's a relatively small cast for a story which takes in scenes set off the coast of Uruguay, in a banqueting hall in Asgard, in the Triskellion's control room, in a Tokyo club, upon a desert which can apparently  be found in Northern Germany, and within what appears to be another dimension hidden within a big concrete mushroom. Yet, wherever the story of The Republic Is Burning travels, women appear at best as silent walk-on characters. Indeed, it'll tell you a truth if I explain that the woman who has the most important role and the most impressive degree of responsibility in the whole comic is the one seen holding Nick Fury's cup of coffee for him as he arrives at work (a). She doesn't say anything, and she doesn't appear again, but she does look competent as well as beautiful in her best Diana-Rigg leather-spy outfit as she waits for her boss to take his morning hit of the bean.

(b) On the left of this panel is the one example of a woman actually doing something more active and responsible than simply holding a coffee cup in this issue. I'm unsure why she's wearing sunglasses and sporting a costume which her fellows don't, but I can say that she's typically Land-esque in her appearance. The chap at the panel's front has been portrayed as something other than a movie star, and given a few lines to 'speak' too, but the rules are different for women, it seems.
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Look a second time at the scenes set in Fury's control room in The Republic Is Burning and it can be noted that there's only a few women to be seen there helping to defend the free-ish world. Look again and it can be hard to perceive any meaningful action being engaged in by these women at all. All the operatives who're seen tapping away at their keyboards and looking serious and involved are male, with a single exception, as is Fury's line-feeding second-in-command. In fact, it takes a little concentration to notice any responsibility or even motion on the part of the Triskellion's female staff at all. We can see a blonde woman being somewhat distressed in the background of one panel (a), and there's also a rather sultry agent in sunglasses shown tapping at a tablet while the men around her discuss disasters (b). But no-one who's female is given any lines to speak or any behaviour of relative consequence, beyond that vital Fury-friendly coffee, to undertake.

(c) A woman whose face is hard to see, but whose breasts aren't.
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Yet there is one single woman who does appear for a whole two panels in Mr Hickman's story (c). We never see her face clearly, though somehow we do see her substantial breasts, one in each of the panels she stars in, a fact which seems to say something about the storytelling priorities at work here. Whoever this of-course unnamed woman might be, she's quite clearly intended to be besotted with Tony Stark, whose disappearance causes her to wave with a schoolkid's fervor at the back he's turned towards her as he leaves. Though she's entirely unimportant in her own right to the story, she does inspire one of the two occasions when women are actually mentioned in the dialogue of The Ultimates # 1, for Stark's new dogsbody describes "that woman" as one who has "rather inconveniently misplaced her ankles".  It's an entirely offensive comment, and Mr Hickman manages the trick of appearing to have Stark respond in a way which is anything other than misogynistic while actually defining Tony as something of a good-old fashioned MCP;

Stark: "Two things, Jarvis ... one, this year I'll be dating women who actually eat, and two, don't be offensive -- it's a charity event."

d: Tony Stark's guide to when it isn't appropriate to insult women's ankles.
      
Given the absence of women from the story as anything other than window dressing, the reader might imagine that Mr Hickman and his editors would have been keen to avoid adding to injury with insult. Sadly, not. Stark's defense of the woman he's just been talking to isn't one which upholds her right not be so judged, although it does seem at first glance that that's what he's doing. Yet his comments very much don't say "That's a cruel and dehumanising thing to suggest" to his employee, but rather his opinion that;

(1) if he's decided to find "fat" ankles attractive, no-one should disagree with him about the matter, and;
(2) we should be "charitable" to the woman given the nature of the social event at hand.

In essence, Stark is suggesting that in particular circumstances, it's important to show charity to women who don't have skinny ankles.  Good old Tony, for now it's plain why folks shouldn't, in certain formal situations, pass crudely derogatory sexual judgements on the physical appearances of women: charity. To compound that, his response to the idea that a woman's ankles are of anyone's business but her own is to propose that it's his definition of what's attractive which counts. "Jarvis" isn't out of line because he's been so unfair to a woman who's doing no-one in the world, as far as we can see, the slightest harm at all. Rather, it seems that Tony's implying that if he hadn't decided to stop "dating" women with shapely ankles, then the absence of such really would be fair game for mockery. The ultimate arbiter, it appears, of how a women should look, and of when it's acceptable to cuss her for that is, surprisingly, not the woman herself, but Tony Stark.
       
(e) Hawkeye gets the important gag about women and sex over and done first with before moving on to the less important topic of the ending of the world.

Of course, it seems certain that Mr Hickman deliberately designed this scene to show us that Tony really is a fairly decent drunkard and womaniser. Yet in a comic which is so unconcerned with anything other than blokes and blokishness, and which only discusses women in a sexual context, the lack of care and precision in Tony's words really is something to regret. In a book which wasn't so insensitively written, Tony's comments would've passed as markers of the strengths and weaknesses of his particular character. Yet when the only two mentions of women in a comic inhabit the same sexualised territory, what might have been signs of an individual personality instead becomes a theme for the book as a whole, as we can see in the following exchange between Nick Fury and Hawkeye, where the latter has been sent to a Bangkok which is "currently in flames":

Fury: Clint. I'm pretty sure I sent you over there to make sure things did not go to hell.
Clint: Nick, I swear ... she was already pregnant.
       
It is, of course, just boys joshing, and yet, boys joshing about women in the context of sex is all this comic contains where it comes to any discussion of the other 51% of the world's population. And so, if all we see women doing is offering drinks and looking alluring, and if all we "hear" is men discussing women in terms of sex and nothing else, then it just looks very bad indeed.

(f) There are approximately 731 million people in Europe, but apparently not a single woman fit to be a super-soldier.

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It's just as telling to note who isn't a woman in The Ultimates # 1. In addition to the active and apparently more important roles in Fury's entourage being reserved for men, the leaders of this issue's world-threatening conspiracy are all males too. (There are women in their ranks, mind you, and they appear to be identically blonde and beautiful Nordicesque twins.) Still, both Fury's base and the gaggle of his primary opponents do have women prettying up their background. Yet not a single one of the European "Excalibur-class super-soldiers" who're on display are anything other than conspicuously male. It's something which I doubt real-world sensibilities over here on the other side of Pond would ever accept, but then politics doesn't really appear to be Mr Hickman's strong point. (* See H and I below for a few more examples of this.) Similarly, the massed carousing immortals of Asgard are almost entirely male with the exception of one bikini-clad woman carrying the drinks in the background of a single panel and another largely-naked lass making a sole semi-nude appearance to cheer on the immortal boys when they get down to their manly brawling. It seems that only the youthfully undressed cheesecake gets the privilege of waiting on the boys in this Asgard of the Ultimate Universe.

(g) It's as if the grim sexism of J Michael Straczynski's Thor issues has somehow laid down a template that Messers Hickman and Ribic feel honour-bound to follow.
    
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Of course, there can't have been any intention to programme such a significant measure of careless misogyny into The Republic Is Burning. It's impossible to imagine that the men at Marvel sat down as Architects do and decided as corporate policy to treat everyone that wasn't a bloke in The Ultimates as silent and  sexualised support-units for the pleasure and general convenience of men. That's a simply inconceivable idea. No, it seems plain that the problem is still - still - that no-one at Marvel who's connected with The Ultimates # 1 cared to even care about anything beyond the manly super-heroics of it all. For if they had, there's simply no way that this story could've possibly appeared in the unfortunate shape that it has.     

(h) Nick Fury, facing unforeseen circumstances, publicly declares that he can't handle the situation without the absent Captain America. That's right, the only person of colour in the book is all arrogance and insensitivity until things go wrong, and then he needs the Aryan super-man to save him. (Doesn't he have protocols to follow in cases of nuclear disasters, and advisers, and, heavens forbid, political officials who he works for?)

Oh, well. The Ultimates # 1 is just another example of what happens when everyone's asleep at the wheel. It's a car-crash of a comic, and we'll be returning to its worrying representation of people of colour as well as its improbable plot confections in the not-so-distant future.

Until then, the question really does need to be asked again: why don't more women read super-people comic books?


(i) Ah, the reason why Mr Fury is so alone when the bomb drops. It seems that the Ultimate Universe is one in which the Constitution has been rewritten, because the President is shown reporting to Nick Fury in order to discover what the man with the eye-patch is going to do. Of course, in the real world, everybody does what the civilian government decides, in times of emergency as much as during a typical day, but here the President comes asking to know what action Fury will be taking. As I say, politics isn't Mr Hickman's strong suit, or perhaps, precision with his dialogue isn't. Who can say? After this issue, it's hard to feel charitable, though perhaps a coup has occurred over there in that particular America, or maybe somebody has decided that the USA would free such a massively powerful organisation from democratic oversight. The mind boggles ...
         
TooBusyThinking will be back tomorrow with an entirely enthusiastic look at an example of undoubted storytelling excellence. No, really, TooBusyThinking will be back tomorrow, and it will be with an entirely enthusiastic piece. 

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